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Unread post by Ngaia » January 23rd, 2022, 12:33 pm

Tlai ah chuan Khapfuka chuan ka nu bul a a sawi ang ngei in kan in ah min thlah leh thlap a.

In a(h) ka silai nen ka luh chuan ka nu chuan "nang hi i silai ngen kha i awt lutuk hian dawr atang ilo ru chhuak ami?" alo ti nghal thuai a.

"Rukru ka nia mi, nge ru tur ah chuan mi ngaih ve ringawt a" ka ti hluk a.

"I da ve sia, stephtea'n a lei che ami ti dawn ila silai ber kher hi a lei duh dawn silo che a ka ti" ati leh a.

"I stephtea'n min lei anih hi, i stephtea ngeiin" tiin ka silai chuan ka tin a.

"Ti khan mi tin le lua suh, stephtea chu a pimpom a ven that hle a ngai dawn ni maw" tiin a nui vur vur a.

"A pimpom nat loh a duh leh thir underpant a ha anga ni mai lawm" tiin keipawh chu ka nui ve vur vur a.

Ka room ah chho in ka silai chu ka thawmhnaw ka thlak hma in ka dah tha phawt a, chumi hnu ah chuan in thlak nghalin inhnuai lam ah ka nu chu rawng ka bawlpui nghal a.

Rawng kan bawl peih chuan zan in khawm a awm avang in muang chang lo chuan chaw ei chu kan siam nghal a.

Chaw kan ei kham fel chuan ka chhung te in khawm tur ho chu in siam turin an pindan ah chuan an lut dial a, keiin kan ei na vel chu ka ti fel mawlh mawlh a.

Thleng ka sil zawh meuh chuan ka chhung te chu inkhawm turin biakin ah an kal vek tawh.

Chutia keimah chauh a in a ka awm lai chuan kawngkhar hi tu emaw in alo kik a.

Ka va hawn chuan ka nu Stephtea, ka Khapfuka hi alo ni a, lo lut tur a ka tih chuan alo lut nghal a.

Thut hmun kan rem fel hnu chuan "nangmah chauhin a law I awm a?" ati a.

"Umm ka chhungten min in khawm san vek a" tiin ka nui vur vur a.

"Nangmah a in a awm te i hlau lo ami?" Sir Khapfuka chuan tiin a nui ve suk a.

"Hlau lo, hlauh tur ka nei hleinem keite chu 'the Atomi' ka nia" tiin ka hawi sang vah a.

"Nia nia, nangte chu ramhuai pawn rawn tih thaih tum che pawh ni se, an hmuh vel ah che an tlan chhia ang" tiin a nui hawk hawk a.

"Ngati maw ramhuai chuan min hmuh veleh an tlan chhiat daih ang?" ka ti hmuk a.

"Aw...i hla do chham ngaihthlak an peih loh avang in" ati leh a, keichu ka tum hmak tawh thung.

Chutia Khapfuka'n min chhaih thinrim lai chuan kawngkhar chu an lo pawt hawng thuai a, kan phu dun nasa lutuk chu kan in kuah chawih a.

Thinphu dep dep a in kuah pah a kawngkhar lam kan va hawi chuan ka thian te ho chu an lo ding tlar thup a.

Chutah aw tial ring tha tawk in Oxygen-i chuan "hmangaihna lam kha chu stop" ati hluk a.

Rang tawk chuan kan in kuah na atang chuan in la hrangin kut kuang kuah at chuan ngil tawk chuan kan thu a.

Ka thiante chu kan thutna lam a lo phei pah chuan an han chek deuh tlat tlat a.

"Enge in lo tih dawn a" tiin ka thiante inkhawm thawmhnaw nen a in la chhelo tawk a thu chu ka melh kual dan dan a.

"Ele zaikhawm turin kan lo sawm che, kiri va in siam nghal rawh" tiin Hydrogen-i chuan ka thutna atang chuan min pawt tho lawp in ka room lam ah chuan min nem chho dawt dawt a.

Phun hluk a ka room a luh pahin ka in siam sawk sawk a, in hnuai lam ah chuan ka chhuk thla leh nghal a.

Khapfuka chuan "in zaikhawm dawn sia ka zuk haw mai ange" tiin a tho thurh a.

Chu veleh ka thian te chuan pawt thu leh nawk nawk in an kuah bet nghal tung a.

Hamhaih takin Khapfuka chuan "nge khatia min tih ringawt a?" ati hàw(hau) a.

"Nangpawh ilo zaikhawm ve ang chu" Carbon-i chuan ati a.

Oxygen-i pawh chuan "kan lam huk dawn alawm, awi a nuam dawn lutuk" ati ve leh a.

"Ka zak e a, hruaitu ten min lo en hrek hrek palh ang" Sir Khapfuka chuan a ti niah niah a.

"Don't worry, an en hrek hrek che leh i melh let ve hrek hrek dawn ania" lungkham neilo deuh chuan Hydrogen-i chuan ati ham ham a.

"Sir tak tak ah engtin mah an tilo ang che, kan hruaitu te chu an zau lutuk" Oxygen-i chuan ati a.

"Anih kal ang u"tiin lu hiat neuh neuh pah chuan Khapfuka chu a chhuak nawlh a, keini thian ho in kan zui chhuak dam dam bawk.

Zaikhawmna in kan thlen chuan an lo zai tui ngang tawh mai a, keini pawh chu in zui lut ve nghal in an lo zai lai chu kan zawm ve nghal a.

Kan hla zai kan sak tawp chuan 'Hlim takin i chawimawi ang u' tih hla chu kan zai hruaitu chuan a la tan a.

A hla hi lam a nawm em avang chuan kan thian ho in lam tur chuan kohhran mipui te lam na lam chu kan pan a, Sir Khapfuka pawh Carbon-i'n a lam duh loh chung a pawt lui a.

A hma ber ah Oxygen-i lam in, Hydrogen-i leh Carbon-i ten an zui a, kei leh Sir Khapfuka'n an hnung kan lo dawl ve bawk.

Oxygen-i hma ah chuan kan TKP member pui Mahuala chu a lam a, a lam uar ve thei bawk sia e.

Chutia Mahuala lam uar lutuk lo tawlh hnung hrut chu kan Oxygen-i chuan alo hnaih deuh bawk nen a hnung zawng chuan tlu in, a hnung chiah a lam Hydrogen-i leh Carbon-i chu a delh thu hnawk a.

A lam lo ho chuan an melh thup a, a lam ho pawh chuan kan lam thulh chuang lo chuan kan melh ve thap bawk a.

An lam laklawh ve tawh bawk si, zak bawk si tih ngaihna hrelo chu thlarau thianghlim hnathawh chang ang chuan awm in, lam tual ah chuan an han in sawi bu siau siau ringawt a.

A chang leh an 'halleluiah' thul bawk, chhuat bal ah Mahuala vangin an tal nawk nawk phah a, naktuk ah chuan an in su nasa ngawt ang chuh!





Hemi thleng hi ni rawh se aw. Happy New Year vek ule.



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Unread post by Ngaia » January 23rd, 2022, 12:33 pm

Thingpui in a kan chawlh lai chuan Carbon-i chuan "Mahuala hnung ah ka lam tawh miah lo a, a mawng a kawi si" tiin a àng hmuar hmuar a.

"Nakin ah a tukhum ah lungte in ka la vawm dawn alawm" Hydrogen-i chuan ati a..

Kan Oxygen-i pawh chuan "kan in kawt a alo kal veleh zawhte in a hmai ah ka vawm dawn" ti ve bawk a, Mahuala chu an bul hnai ah kal lo law law se a him ani mai.

Chutia an phuba lak dan tur an sawi lai chuan Khapfuka nen kan lo nui kur kur a.

Chutah an pathum chuan "nui su, nawhlung in kan vawm mai ang che u' an ti hluk a, kan nui lai pawh kan tawp chiang ania aw, nawhlung ber kher a min vawm tum chu kan khem nuai ang a dangerous em mai.

Zai pawh tan leh in, darkar 2 vel ah chuan kan bang a.

Kan haw lam ah chuan Mahuala pawh an in a haw tur in kan hma lam ah chuan a kal beuh beuh a.

Chutia a kal tha hle hle chu rem chang ah la in, ka thian te chuan an va su lui chawrh a.

Mahuala chu a hma zawng chuan awn luaiin a kut hnih chuan kal kawng ah chuan a in nem khalh run a, a posi chu uite emaw zawhte a ang zawk.

Ka thiante chuan in thiamlo ang tawk chuan "awi Umahual kan tih palh lutuk aw, kan lo nui thler nasa deuh a" tiin an va kai tho vel a.

Mahuala an kaih thawh hnu chuan Mahuala chuan "a pawilo" tiin a kut beng thak thak in hmanhmawh tawkin a kal nal nal.

Chutia a kal nal nal chu hnunglam a tang a thlir in kan nui dir char char a, kan bul hnai ah chuan a kal ngam tawh miah lo ang.
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Dam takin christmas leh kumthar pawh thlengin, chhungkua pawh kan hlim tlang hle.

January ni 10 hian keini pawh school kan tan dawn a, ni 8 ah kan Silencer-an nupui a nei dawn bawk.

Bialnu tur pawh a hmuh zawh kan rin loh laiin nupui a nei daih dawn a, 'thil mak lawrkhawm' ah chuan dah a ngai ani.

Silencer-a nupui nei tur chu kan buai ve nak nak hlawm khawp mai.

Buai tak chuan a nupui neih ni chu kan lo thleng ve leh mai a.

Biakin a an in kut suih hnu chuan in lam ah mo lawmna ruai theh tur chuan kan phei dial a.

Monu leh mopa pawh an chuan na motor hnung ah thir chhiar hnuk in an tlan liam tak kha.

Ruai theh deuh hma chuan Khapfuka chuan a in thlak lawk duh avangin in thlak pui tur chuan an in lam kan pan a.

An in kan thlen chuan kawngkhar chu pawt hawng in, in chhung ah chuan kan in zui lut a.

Anu nu Kimi chu lo awmin tv hi alo en a, chutia an in a min lo hmuh chuan "Atom-i chu enge in lo tih dawn a, ruai in theh dawn emaw ti a?" tiin min lo be nghal a.

"Khapfuka hian ka underpant ka thlak lawk duh ati a" ka tih chuan kan nui khek duai duai a.

Chutah Khapfuka chuan "Thlanawm kan kawm thlang a zawngtah kung a khai i duh lo chuan dawt ngawt hi sawi suh" ti hluk in a room ah chuan a lut daih a, nichin khan a lut daih tawh khan ka hre sia.

Nu kimi nen chuan fiamthu thawh in kan nui hawk hawk zel a.

Chutia fiamthu kan thawh lai chuan "Nu Kim, sangha tin bur ruak I nei em?" tiin ka zawt a.

"A..nichin lawk khan ka siam a bur nga vel chu a ruak a awm ang" tiin a sangha tin bur ruak chu va la in min pe a.

Lo la vatin polythene ah khung in ka bag ah chuan ka ak nghal a.

Nu kimi chuan "ngatan nge in tih reng reng a?" tiin min zawt a.

"Silencer-a te honeymoon spy tu tur atan" ka tih chuan hriat thiam loh hmel tawk chuan min melh khiau a.

"Nakin ah video ka lo thawn che nga, i hrethiam mai ang" tiin ka nuih ver ver a, ani pawn min zawt zui loin a bu ve nghauh nghauh a.

Khapfuka'n 'ka hman' a tih chuan Nu Kimi chu mangtha in ruai thehna tur lam chu kan pan a.

Ruai an thehna hmun kan thlen chuan ka thiante chuan min lo la nghak a, dawh ve nghalin chaw chu kan ei a.

Zan ah chuan in leng neuh neuh an awm lai chuan Khapfuka, Tukhum mawia leh ka thiante nen chuan Silencer-a te nupa room a chuan kan lut ru a.

Tlai kan chaw ei kham ah Carbon-i te tual a an rora chu panga la ru in kan sangha tin bur ruak ah chuan thun in, buara hrui in kan thlung khawm vek a.

Chumi kan bur thlun khawm chu an nupa khum mawng lam ah chuan a hnuai ah chuan an nupa khum nen chuan kan thlun zawm a.

Kan thil tih kan zawh veleh chuan nui vur vur in an nupa room atang chuan kan chhuak them them a.

Silencer-a nupui hi Uhriatpuii ania a, amah hi a zuan a zangin a che sawt sawt a, chumi avang chuan kan chhungkaw a a nickname atan ka pa'n Faster-i tiin a phuah sak.

In leng te an haw hnu chuan keini thian ho leh Khapfuka te chu chhuat ah mutbu phah in kan mu dual a, mahse Khapfuka leh Tukhum mawia erawh thut thleng ah an mu thung.

Mi an mut reh vek tawh hnu chuan Silencer-a leh Ufaster-i room lam chu kan pan tham tham.

An room pawn a thawm dim takin an room pinna ah chuan beng kan dawh run a.

Reilote ah chuan nichin a kan thil khai chu a ri tleng tleng a, Khapfuka te nen in melh kualin kan in nuih thu hlawm a.

Nu Kimi hnen ah video a a ri tleng tleng ka record chu thawnin zawi te chuan kan mutna ah let leh in kan mu nui thu a, Silencer-a te chu an in ti ve chiang alawm.





Hemi thleng hi ni rawh se aw, ka lo dah lawk theih loh avangin min lo hrethiam dawn nia. Chhun ah buaiin Zan lam ah ka zaikhawm ve thin sia, nizan ah lo dah ka tum teh reng nen apa in ka phone khawih ruk min man chhuak a ka phone min chhuhnsak daih a😂, ka dah regu loh pawn pawi tawh lo mai rawh se aw a tawp tep tawh tho a😂

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Unread post by Ngaia » January 23rd, 2022, 12:34 pm

Naktuk ah school tan in hostel pawh zanin tlai ah luh vek tur a nih avang in hostel a kan mamawh tur chu kan lam khawm a.

In kan thlen veleh in ti faiin chaw te chu kan ei nghal a.

Chaw kan ei kham chuan muang chang tawh lovin in la fel sawk sawkin hostel lam chu kan pan nghal a.

Hostel kawt ah chuan Zualpatéa leh Khapfuka chu lo duty in kan bungrua ho chu a thleng hmasa ho chu min thiar pui tur chuan an hrilh nghal a.

Chhungte ho haw kan thlah fel chuan hostel ah va in rem fel ve vat vat in alo kal tur ho chu in thiar pui in peih sa reng in, nichin a Sir Khapfuka te lo din na ah chuan kan nghak a.

Chutia kan din lai chuan Sir Zuala chuan "Thlanawm, dal bawm darh leh alu tui tla hmeh leh turin ka lo lawm a che" tiin min lo welkham a.

A mi welkham na chu hlim a zuan pui awr awr ai chu mitthi te sun ang a tah hawm hawm mai ati chak awm zawk.

"Sir mi lo welkham na khan ka hnuk ati tliak" tiin ka tum deuh bai bai a.

"Lungngai suh nangmah chauhin I ei dawn hleinem, hei i Adama pawn I hmeh ang a hmeh ve dawn alawm" tiin Khapfuka dar chu a beng thak thak a, engtin nge kan in dí tih pawh chu a hriat a.

"Engtin nge ilo hriat leh hman a? " tia Sir Zuala ka zawh chuan, "Ele i dí arpa hi e a tawngthei ve a" tiin a nui vur vur a, i dí arpa han tih kher.

"Arpa a nih chuan nang pawh zawng hmaisen" tiin ka nuih ve vur vur a, Zualpatéa chu a tum hmak.

Zanin tlai a lo lut tur an lo luh vek hnu chuan study hall ah chho in kan zirlai theuh chu kan zir mawp mawp a, kum tir school tan tirh atang kan note neih ang ang kan lo zir lawk thin avangin vawn lutuk ngai lo in kan in en nawn char char tawh a.

Kan note en nawn a kan chhiar mawlh mawlh lai chuan Hydrogen-i chuan dawhkan ah a chal chu a tauh ri bur a.

Carbon-in "ngati nge i chal i tauh rik bur a?" tiin Hydrogen-i chu a zawt a.

Hydrogen-i lah chuan "Mahuala kha lawm, engtin nge ka phone number pawh alo neih ni, whatsapp ah min lo bia a 'duhsang in nei daih ang ka chawm ang che' 'ka hmangaih lutuk che ania, i nu te kha lo hrilh rawh aw' te alo ti a, hostel atang a kan chhuah hun a(h) ka hmuh vel ah in pro fight turin ka cho hrim hrim ang" tiin a àng hmuar hmuar a.

Nuih za bawk si , nuih vaih chuan kut tum alo thlawk nghal dawn bawk sia pum na vekin nuih kan in sum ringawt.

"Alo rim velah che thingpui I lum sak chuan chini ai ah chi i telh sak anga, a pum a sa na anga alo be ngam tawh miah lo ang che" kan chawngtinleri lah chuan alo ti, awi henu pawh chuh!

Zan ah chuan dar 11 pm vel ah dorm ah mu tur chuan study hall atang chuan kan chhuk thla hlawm a.

In phih faiin kan mut na ah chuan tui tak a mu in mumang ah kan star pa/bialpa te hmu tur chuan kan mu a mahse Hydrogen-i chuan a star pa emaw bialpa tih vel hmuh ai chuan a mumang a Mahuala sawisak ringawt hmuh a tum ang.
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Hostel kan luh atang pawn thla khat lai a liam tawh a, ka thiante nen pawn zan ah kan chhuak ru ngai tawh lo.

Chhuah ruk chu tum viau mah ila Khapfuka'n a phal loh avang in kan chhuak ngai lo mahse kan zan ei tur chu class kan ban veleh a rukin kan bag ah min thun sak thin, a in pe zo ania aw.

Board exam kan tan nan pawh kar khat chiah a awm tawh a, zirtirtu te leh principal te an tang bawk a, lehkha pawh kan zir ngawrh viau.

Class ah lehkha kan zir mawp mawp a, Khapfuka'n kan lehkha zir min veng bawk.

Chutia kan zir mawp mawp lai chuan Engtei the bun-uihi chuan Sir Khapfuka hnen ah chuan lehkha hi a pe a, love letter te pawh a ang zawk.

Love letter a nih chuan alo thawn tu in alo thawn leh duh loh khawpin love letter reply na chu ka ziah sak ang.

Khapfuka'n "enge ni a?" tia lehkha love letter ang deuh a lek kual vu vu lai chuan Engtei chuan "Arts ami Hruaii'n lo pe rawh ati a" tiin tha deuh a chhang in a thut na ah chuan a let leh a.

Love letter chu ani chiang alawm, Khapfuka'n letter a chhiar zawh chuan 'enge in ziak?' tih melh a ka lo melh na a hmuh chuan thaw hawkin ka thut na lam chu alo pan a.

Ka dawhkan ah a letter dawn a dah chuan classroom chu a hel kual nghal daih a.

Ka hma a thu Hydrogen-i leh Oxygen-i te chu ka lam lo hawi pheiin, ka hnung a thu Tukhum mawia leh chawngtinleri te chuan an nghawng lo dawh ve fur in, ka bul a thu Carbon-i chu alo thle deuh bak bawk a.

Love letter chu zawi te in ka thian te hriat ve theih tur chuan ka chhiar a.

Ka chhiar zawh chuan ka thian te ho chu nimbu ei ang mai an ner nasa viau.

Hruaii the arts love letter chu va chhan let ka tum viau, nge Khapfuka te alo star ve.

Chapter-16(continue)

Hruaii the arts love letter chu tiang hian ka chhan sak a.

*To,
Hruaii Arts,

Subj: I love letter chhan let na

Nula Hruaii, I love letter hi vawiin ah Engtei the
bun-uihi hnen atang ka lo hmu a, min lo duh
chu ka lawm viau nàng in min lo duh tawh suh
ang che. Bialnu hmeltha tawk chhelo tawk leh
khawvel a rap rang ber ka nei a ka lawm viau
chuanin bialnu lo neilo pawh ni ila min duh lo
mai rawh a chhan chu ka sazu a tawi lutuk.

I duh pa mahse duh tawh loh tur
Stephen
Boys Warden*

Letter chu thlep tha mawlh mawlh in ka bag ah chuan ka dah tha a.

School ban ah chuan ka bag a letter ka dah chu phawrh in Engtei the bun-uihi hnen ah chuan ka pe a.

Hruaii chuan letter a chhiar zawh hun ah chuan a ham haih lutuk chu a ka chhung ah tho a lut hrim hrim ang.

Khapfuka'n class atang a kan chhuak a hmuh chuan min lo pan vat in "engtin nge letter chu i tih a?" tiin min lo zawt nghal a.

"Ka chhang let a Engtei ka thawn" tiin ka nui vur vur a.

"Anih enge i chhan na ah chua I ziah a?" tiin ati sup a.

" 'Min duh duh suh, ka sazu a tawi lutuk' tiin ka ziak " ka tih chuan a meng nur nasa, keiin nuih ka lo in sum thung, sazu tawi tih chu a duh lo teh e.
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Board exam pawh kan tan a, kan school ho chu kan thiam ve hlawm khawp mai.

Kar loh ah exam pawh kan zo a, a nawm rual rualin an ngaihawm hlawm dawn khawp mai.

Hostel atang a kan chhuah dawn chuan kan in ngai dawn lutuk chu kan tap pur vel a, principal te hnen ah zan khat kan riah ho theih nan kan dil vel.

Zualpatéa lah chuan "bawm darh e, tui tla e in ti in ti a hei tun ah ve lem chuan zankhat riah in dil zawk ania, in over hlawm emai kal mai teh u" ati hluk a a kal nal nal, Sir Zuala pawh a lung a leng mai mai ani.

Hostel atang chuan kan chhungten min lo hruai chhuah chuan kan tap pur hlawm a, chhungte ho pawh an nui tawp.

Zan ah Khapfuka lo lengin ka chhungte nen an in kawm ho a, ka chhungte pawn kei aiin an hmangaih zawk emaw tih mai tawh tur ani.

Result pawh thla khat dawn hnu ah alo chhuak a, kan thian li in distinction ah pass in, Tukhum Mawia leh Chawngtinleri te 1st ah an pass thung.

Result chhuah hnu a an pass ve ve tih an hriat veleh tlai ah an lo in ru haw nghal ringawt pek a, Tukhum Mawia chu a tukhum a ri leh bawl mai.

Tumah fail kan awm loh avangin principal ten re-union pah fawmin tiin an huan ah min picnic pui hlawm a.

Kan class ho kan han in hmu khawm chu kan hlim tlang hlawm viau.

Chaw te kan ei zawh ah chuan Khapfuka chuan hmun fal lai ah min Hruaii'n box lian tawk, lehkha mawi a in tuam chu min pe a.

"Eng nge ni a?" ti a ka zawh chuan "hawng la i hre mai ang" ati duh lek chauh a.

A thil min pek ka hawn chuan tunlai a an silai chhuak thar ber( naupang silai lem) hi ani a.

Ka lawm lutuk chu ka kuah chawt a, a nin ka kawng a lo dawm pah chuan "i pass ka lawmpui a che" ka beng bul ah chuan a ti sup a.

Kan inkuah na kan thlah hnu chuan ka khabe a dawm in min fawp vang vang a, a fawh na chu lo chhang vat in thuk tak chuan kan in fawp tawn tawn a.

THE END

Atom-i a tir atang a a tawp thleng a min chhiar sak tu te chung ah tih tak meuhin lawmthu ka sawi e, story hi ka vawikhat ziah na anih avangin in duh dan ang pawn a ngaihnawm lo mai thei mahse min lo chhiar sak avang hrim hrim pawn ka lawm lutuk e. Story thar bawn tawk nen lo let leh vat ka tum ang, tunkar a ka lo dah in duh chuan comment lam ah min lo hrilh dawn nia🤓
Korean tawng ngat in SARANGHAE, KHAMSAMIDA🫂🙇🤗🥰

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